
A village is being terrorized by a gang of bandits, and, at the end of their rope, they send someone out to find a group of warriors who will protect them. Written by Matthias from November 05, 2005, to July 20, 2006, this story was inspired by two films- Seven Samurai and Magnificent Seven- and is also one of the first fictions to use characters created by other role-players!
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Some general information regarding Seven Spirits Unite |
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| This fiction was written by Matthias. | The story is a fantasy. |
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This fiction was started on Saturday, November 05, 2005 |
This fiction was finished on Thursday, July 20, 2006 |
| This fiction was 43 posts long. | The story is 23,805 words long. |
| This story took 257 days to complete. | On average, 93 words were written per day. |
Here we have an interview with the writer of Seven Spirits Unite, Matthias. Warning, there are some spoilers here!
| Interview with Matthias |
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Where and how did you come up with the idea for Seven Spirits Unite? |
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What inspired you to sit down and write it? |
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What is your
favorite genre? Why? |
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What book, movie, or video game do you think is the best example of that genre? Why? |
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Who is your favorite author? Why? What book do you think is that author's best? |
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Are any of the characters in Seven Spirits Unite based on anybody you know online or in real life? |
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Did you learn anything while writing Seven Spirits Unite? |
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Did you ever get writer's block while writing the story? How did you overcome it? |
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What was the hardest scene to write in Seven Spirits Unite? |
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What was your favorite scene to write in Seven Spirits Unite? |
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How different is the story from the source material you based it on? |
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If you were to go back and rewrite Seven Spirits Unite, what would you change, if anything? |
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Do you have any final comments you'd like to say about the fiction? |
Here we have comments from the people who have read the story.
| Name | Comment | Date |
| Elec | Although the story as a whole was great, I have to say that my favorite moment was the duel between Raika and Rochester. Not so much that Raika is my character who I lent to Matthias for the story, as that the battle itself was very well written. It had a great balance between narrative description and dialogue. The events leading up to this battle were another thing that made it so good. I would've liked it just as much if it had been someone else's character. In all actuality, the entire story was enjoyable to read. | August 17, 2006 |
| Trauma Advocate |
Seven Spirits Unite was a pretty cool fiction...everyone loves seeing their own characters get attention, after all.
The story itself was highly reminiscent of a short Redwall tale, of a showdown between good and evil. I felt some of the characters could have used more development, but as a whole it was very well done. Seven Spirits Unite is the classic example of a good ol' fiction, which should automatically make it worth reading. |
August 17, 2006 |
| Ricky |
Seven Spirits Unite is a really good fiction. I personally enjoyed seeing my character, Eowyn, used by somebody else, and Matthias did a great job with her, as he did with the other characters he used. He wrote everything really well, and kept the story riveting as always. Bravo, Matthias. |
August 20, 2006 |
| Wizard |
The cooperation of the creators allowing Matthias to use their
characters was excellent. With each warrior getting ample space to
perform, this story truly blossomed. The most loved portions must be the
noble ends to each fallen warrior, each one falling with few doubts to
haunt them. This could only be one thing: PURE PWNAGE. P.S.: It's sad you couldn't put in the part about steam rollers, though. |
August 22, 2006 |
| GeminiSaint |
Yes, agreed, this is a rather enjoyable story. It's very well written, well paced, just the right length -not too short nor too long- and it has a cool cast of characters. The plot isn't exactly original, adaptation aside, but all those other "plus" points more than make up for it, so you will most likely enjoy this story anyway. Now, for some reason, imperfections have a tendency to stand out more when the overall quality of the end product is higher than average. Or maybe it's just my opinion. Anyway, here's what I found in the story that's worth some criticism: - Typos. They're everywhere. There's also the occasional misspelling. - Exotic weapons. Not many people know what the heck an otsuchi or a jitte are. I for sure didn't, and it has never been explained in the story. - Macero. His being a minotaur never really came into play. Story-wise, there would have been no difference had he been just a bulky human. So, I found his being a minotaur a bit gimmicky. On a similar note, famous deishling traits such as heat resistance were missing (Raika). - Fire arrows. I didn't understand how using fire arrows was "dishonorable". I mean, fire arrows kill people, and so do any of the other weapons the whole cast had no problem using. So, what gives? Some explanation in that regard wouldn't have hurt. And that's it for criticism. My favorite character? Raika, hands down. Your portrayal of her character was excellent. Thumbs up for that. The other characters I wasn't too familiar with, but you did a good job in giving them distinct roles in the story, and balancing them so that nobody hogged the spotlight for too long. All in all, good work. |
October 29, 2006 |
Here we have fun facts about the fiction.
· Seven Spirits Unite is based on two movies- The Seven Samurai and Magnificent Seven.
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Seven Spirits Unite is the first 100% fiction to use characters
created by other role-players. Eowyn was created by Ricky, Nerikuro Shino
created Hisaye, Elec created Raika, Thalzon created Raahj, Trauma Advocate
created Macero, Atomic Toucan crated Hirasanaka, and Snowguy created Safri.
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In the February 2006 edition of the RP Awards, this fiction won an award
for Best Adapted Storyline, and in the August 2006 edition, it won Best
Fiction!